After reading the essay thoroughly, I have to discover the
main ideas of the passage, particularly 3. Then chose my thesis and decide
whether I concur with the authors ideas. I have a hard time choosing the
subjects of my body paragraph as well as the examples to represent my thesis. I
need to have flow and stay on the subject of the essay and not stray away on my
own tangent regarding my own ideas without examples representing them. My spelling
needs to sharp and my examples need to be concrete and lucid. I have to stay
the course and make sure there is development from the introduction of my essay
through the conclusion. Continue to use transitions in the beginning of a
paragraph and sentences to close out paragraphs. Direction throughout the essay
and finish within a timely manner after reading over the essay.
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Thursday, May 17, 2012
Thursday, May 10, 2012
intro to catw 2
In the
article, “In Groups We Shrink”, by Carol Tavris illustrates the idea of
individual’s personalities changing once among a group. Conveying, that one’s
actions completely differ from when alone in comparison to when in attendance
with other individuals during a time crisis or climactic matters. I concur with
the author’s notion of a person’s reaction with or without a group having more
to do with the group dynamic or “the nature of the groups than the nature of
the individuals”. The gravity of a
situation can create great trepidation when a group is established and the occurrence
is random. A poised individual attending to a task at hand can be vacillated when
case of an emergency which will delay a response. Whens roles are places within
a group, the actions cared out can create movement or stagnation within a
group. During sporting events, security is provided to prevent any interference
to occur during the event taking place.
However, on occasion the event can be interrupted by a very inebriated
individual.
Thursday, May 3, 2012
Catw practice
In the article “How
your birth order influences your life adjustment,” by Lucille Forer, the idea
of a child’s development based upon their family is accurate in most cases. I agree
with the claim of the role in the family based upon the order he or she was conceived,
will impact a child’s psychology. A child being able I to understand and
communicate his strengths and weaknesses, will develop skills that enable
himself to work well with others. The eldest and only child’s roles are most similar
in regards to the idea of humility being suppressed from their youth and the
shift of responsibility. Which leaves the youngest emotionally interdependent
upon dynamic within his immediate environment. When only syndrome comes into
play within most relationships, its usually irritable to anyone outside the
immediate family.
Firstly, the independence of an
only child can have negative or positive impact. Developing the idea of being
decisive from the early stages of youth, aids the transition of being able to
relate and get along with others. In relation to the oldest sibling,
establishing the confidence and responsibility of a leader, due to the role
established during childhood via his parents. However, when not in a
comfortable situation, the stubbornly resilient bravado takes its toll and the
ability to convey the need of assistance is obsolete. My older brother found it
difficult to convey that he needed to come home to become more grounded and
stable. Thus, he moved to the southwest and until recent established a more
balance lifestyle, in terms of religion, occupation and family. Moreover, the
middle child role can either set the president of a will to prove worthy or
extremely self –indulgent due to the family role of assistance being very available.
In addition, the family dynamic
of role establishment provides the opportunity to flourish because parental
nurturing and sibling hierarchy. Growing up with two brothers, I obtained the
role as the middle child at very young age. The ability to understand the
division of nurturing at a young age was beneficial in regards to me not
obtaining selfish but selfless attitude towards others. Being able to fathom
the idea of humility and the appropriate time to express runs parallel with the
role of the middle child. However, becoming complacent with someone being there
when you need them enables a lack of responsibility which has a relation to the
development of the youngest sibling.
In closing, the maturation of
the last conceived is critically based upon the family dynamic. Whether its
pressure to do well due to your older siblings flourish or not quite acting
upon their potential, the pressure exist. Establishing a consistent behavior pattern
of around the clock nurturing and assistance can be an unable by the lack of
independence developed. Until recently my younger brother needed and yearned
for family attention while away at college. I expressed to him until he finds
what is important to him, he’ll consistently need guidance.
Thursday, April 26, 2012
hero #9
Hero Blog
In a
world where weakness is preyed upon and efforts are valued, there is very
little room for era for a “Hero”. I agree with the notion that a hero is
someone who commits heroic acts, however, I also believe that a hero is someone
within moments, who inspires others to discover and excel progressively at their
own passions. In any sporting event there are usually individuals who inspire
others to work and master their craft, due to their efforts or god given ability.
Whether its results from an extensive amount of research or inspiring others
with innovative strategies within any artistic realms, individuals have the
ability to inspire others to unravel their passion for excelling within the
academic realms. Relationships are essential to personal development, whether
within the home environment or close friends and colleagues; an individual has
the capability to encourage other to use moral character within their
personality. The sporting arena for ages has been the stage for a hero to exemplify
his fortitude.
In the
movie Gladiator, Russell Crowe
inspired everyone from older merchants to children who aspire to be great
warriors and show will and determination. Fighting to live in an arena of rabid
tigers on chains and multiple or giant men serve as great inspiration to all
spectators. Football being America’s most popular sport, Monday night is center
stage for an NFL Quarterback who bring his team back from a two touchdown deficit
entering the last two minutes of regulation, to inspire children who can understand
the concept of team work and resilience during a sporting event. Heroic
athletes also inspire men who have families to support on a blue collar yearly
wage in an industrial small town, Monday give them the opportunity to live
vicariously through the Quarterback rallying his troops out of the trenches.
Innovative artist during the Italian Renaissance, inspired followers of their
craft think outside the box.
Artist such as Leonardo Di Vinci and Raphael, were highly regarded artists during the Italian Renaissance for creating master pieces such the sculpture of David and the Mona Lisa, these pieces presently serve as motivation for up and coming artist. The passionate valiant efforts of these artists serve as a tool to encourage people within the art realm to ascend at aspect of their life that they are passionate about. During a performing art show while at boarding school, the euphoric sound of listening to a fellow school mate sing a song with passion that I was not familiar with inspired me to put my heart into performing arts.
Artist such as Leonardo Di Vinci and Raphael, were highly regarded artists during the Italian Renaissance for creating master pieces such the sculpture of David and the Mona Lisa, these pieces presently serve as motivation for up and coming artist. The passionate valiant efforts of these artists serve as a tool to encourage people within the art realm to ascend at aspect of their life that they are passionate about. During a performing art show while at boarding school, the euphoric sound of listening to a fellow school mate sing a song with passion that I was not familiar with inspired me to put my heart into performing arts.
In conclusion, the idea of everyone being a hero serve as
a subjective belief, depending on the individual. Being cognizant of your
surrounding and everyday experiences help you develop as a person, due to
inspiration occurrence that take place. A man saving a child from a lion’s den
does not occur every day. A man working
every day to support a stable household or a woman living out her childhood
dream of performing in front of a mass of people is more likely to occur, which
inspires a person to live with as well as seek passion.
Monday, April 23, 2012
music #2
In the article “Is music a good tool for health?”
by Elizabeth Scott, illustrates the beneficial influence of music on the mind
and body. I concur with the notion of “music therapy is growing in popularity”
music being implemented into the medical practices has benefited individuals
and families. The sound of music establishes a rhythm that allows adults and
children of all ages to maintain focus and productive activity. Medicinal music
therapy is also beneficial in terms of health for individuals whom struggle
with depression to develop more positive mind set. High tempo music with
catching melodies can energize just about any individual.
Firstly, in most if not all fitness gyms
different genres of music is implemented in the back ground for individuals who
come to increase their health and fitness. In addition, these fitness
facilities have the option of group work out classes for individuals who come
to get shape and maintain great health within a group usually to push
themselves to the extreme. In one specific instance, I recall participating in
a Spinning class in a smaller room with about 25 other people, who seemed to be
all in decent physical shape and serious about their health and figure. The
volume of the music comfortably loud and the tempo changed accord to the speed
the instructor wanted the class to pedal. By the ending of the class, I was
pouring with sweat and felt as though I accomplished a great work beneficial
for my mind and health. High tempo music accelerates my heart, efforts and poise
during physical and arduous activities. Thus increasing my fitness and health,
nevertheless, music is similarly beneficial in times needed of relaxation.
In
addition, music can also be to your advantage in situations of anxiety and
stress. Slow to medium mellow beats and tempo assist your present heart rate
during cases in which this type of music is being played. Often times of
shopping during the holiday, calming and cheerful music is played within shops
and malls to set joyful atmosphere for consumers to assuage any individual
stress within a frantic environment. Moreover, on the subject of music
alleviating stress, personally during times of high performance whether during
finals week in the academic environment or my high volume work setting, calming
music while en route to my destination helps me develop and maintain poise to
carry out my expected duties.
In
closing, life unexpected turns are parallel to our environments provided tunes.
Hospitals developing melodic remedies for patients struggling with depression,
pain, stress and fatigue, illuminates our psychological evolution in science. In
retrospect, diversifying my taste in different genres of music have only
benefited my personal social and emotional development, by helping me maintain
a calm and collected persona as well as a positive healthy individual to be
around.
Thursday, April 19, 2012
Music blog 6
In the article “Is music a good tool for health?” by
Elizabeth Scott, illustrates the beneficial influence of music on the mind and
body. I concur with the notion of “music therapy is growing in popularity” music
being implemented into the medical practices has benefited individuals and
families. The sound of music establishes a rhythm that allows adults and
children of all ages to maintain focus and productive activity. Medicinal music
therapy is also beneficial in terms of health for individuals whom struggle
with depression to develop more positive mind set. High tempo music with
catching melodies can energize just about any individual.
Firstly, in most if not all fitness gyms different genres of
music is implemented in the back ground for individuals who come to increase
their health and fitness. In addition, these fitness facilities have the option
of group work out classes for individuals who come to get shape and maintain
great health within a group usually to push themselves to the extreme. In one
specific instance, I recall participating in a Spinning class in a smaller room
with about 25 other people, who seemed to be all in decent physical shape and
serious about their health and figure. The volume of the music comfortably loud
and the tempo changed accord to the speed the instructor wanted the class to
pedal. By the ending of the class, I was pouring with sweat and felt as though I
accomplished a great work beneficial for my mind and health. High tempo music accelerates
my heart, efforts and poise during physical and arduous activities. Thus increasing
my fitness and health, nevertheless, music is similarly beneficial in times needed
of relaxation.
Thursday, March 15, 2012
Blog 2
The article “Hype” illustrates the
aggressive advertising strategies by corporate American businesses. In all
aspects of the day we can no longer escape product advertisements or emblems. The article states facts to the new areas ads
have transcended upon, such as shopping carts at groceries stores, candy and
soda ads in the classrooms, as well as an ad being on the gas pump at the gas
station. Corporate America has expanded its ordinary consumer targets to also aiming
for the developing youth, from popular theme songs in commercials to compelling
figures on massive billboards while trying to escape to the countryside. The evolution
of marketing and broadcasting products in unusual spaces is just beginning of aggressive approaches by corporate America.
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